A lot going on here, Bob. A few more tones on the characters would really round them out, some still seem a bit flat. The white around the text is a bit distracting, and the bottom half of the page is less developed than the top. Overall, i like your style.
A lot going on here, Bob. A few more tones on the characters would really round them out, some still seem a bit flat. The white around the text is a bit distracting, and the bottom half of the page is less developed than the top. Overall, i like your style.
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